Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接回应了问题，也提供了具体年龄和买车的人，基本结构不错。第二句出现了重复和自我修正（“It gave me it brought me”），且“bring me convenience”不够自然。建议用一个完整、自然的句子说明自行车带来的好处，例如它让你更容易出行。

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was ten, and I used it to ride to nearby places. It made getting around much easier.

提案: 回答表达了自行车受欢迎的观点，并补充了环保这一理由，但有几处语法和搭配问题。“there are not only children”应改为“not only children ride bikes”；“some others also”重复；骑自行车通常说“ride bikes”，而不是“drive it”。建议使用复数 bikes，并补充一个具体人群或场景。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Not only children but also many adults ride them, especially for short trips. Some people choose bikes instead of cars because they are cheaper and produce no emissions.

× It gave me it brought me convenience.

✓ It brought me convenience.

原句把“It gave me”和“It brought me convenience”两个表达重复拼接在一起，导致句子结构混乱。保留一个完整、清楚的表达即可。

× Yes, there are not only children, but also some others also drive it.

✓ Yes, not only children but also some other people ride bikes.

“not only…but also…”连接的内容应保持结构平行。原句中“not only children”后接“some others also drive it”，结构不一致，而且“also”重复使用。建议用该结构连接两个并列名词短语：“not only children but also some other people”。