Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I had a little bicycle when I was a kid. I enjoy by bike. And the bicycle is my sport. Enlightened.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yeah, of course, in my opinion, it is a full of benefits vehicle. And the bicycle is a bound of functions, so it is a public vehicle.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 30.0提案: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用自然的表达:应说“enjoyed riding my bike”,而不是“enjoy by bike”;“the bicycle is my sport”和“Enlightened”在这里意思不清楚,可以改为描述骑车的感受或用途。
例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends. It was a fun way to spend time outdoors.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 35.0提案: 开头应直接回答自行车是否受欢迎,然后用具体原因支持观点。避免“a full of benefits vehicle”和“a bound of functions”这类不自然或意思不明的表达;可以说自行车经济、方便、环保,并补充一个具体使用场景。
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, and they are also better for the environment than cars. Many people use them to commute or run errands.
× I enjoy by bike.
✓ I enjoyed riding my bike.
这段回答是在描述童年经历,问题使用过去时,因此应将现在时 enjoy 改为过去式 enjoyed。
× I enjoy by bike.
✓ I enjoyed riding my bike.
enjoy 后面通常接动名词(动词-ing形式),不能直接接 by bike。可以说 enjoy riding my bike,表示“喜欢骑自己的自行车”。