Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: أجبت بـ«نعم» وذكرت لون الدراجة وأنك كنت تستمتع بها، وهذا مناسب للسؤال. لكن الجمل غير واضحة بسبب أخطاء القواعد والتردد وتكرار الكلمات. استخدم الماضي عند الحديث عن الطفولة، مثل «I had» و«I used to ride»، ورتّب الإجابة في جملتين أو ثلاث: إجابة مباشرة، ثم وصف أو سبب محدد. انتبه أيضًا إلى نطق وتهجئة كلمة «bike»، وتجنّب تكرار الفكرة.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood. It was my favorite toy because I could have fun with my friends.

提案: ابدأ بإجابة واضحة عن مدى انتشار الدراجات في السعودية، ثم قدّم سببًا أو مثالًا محددًا. إجابتك الحالية تتضمن ترددًا وتصحيحًا ذاتيًا كثيرًا، كما أن بعض العبارات غير مفهومة، لذلك يصعب على المستمع معرفة فكرتك. استخدم «bikes» أو «bicycles» بصيغة الجمع، وتجنّب «game» لوصف ركوب الدراجة؛ يمكن استخدام «activity» أو «hobby». اربط السبب بالإجابة بكلمة مثل «because»، واكتفِ بجملتين أو ثلاث.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Saudi Arabia, especially among children. Many kids ride them in parks and residential areas because cycling is a fun way to exercise. However, the weather can make it difficult to ride outdoors during the summer.

× I have my my biolk in my child was I when I'm child

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The question asks about childhood, so use the past tense: was and had. Use had rather than have to describe owning the bike in the past.

× she is a small biolk and she is uh uh blue

✓ It was a small bike, and it was blue.

A bike is an object, so refer to it with it rather than she. Since you are describing a bike from your childhood, use the past-tense verb was.

× Yes it's a color is blue

✓ Yes, it was blue.

The original repeats the subject and verb in a way that makes the sentence ungrammatical. Use one subject and one verb to state the bike's color.

× I play bulk in everywhere and every time

✓ I rode my bike everywhere and all the time.

Everywhere does not take the preposition in. Say rode my bike everywhere. Because the question is about childhood, use the past-tense verb rode.

× they are riding a bice uh a bicycles

✓ They are riding bicycles.

Bicycles is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Remove a, or use the singular form a bicycle.

× they all like it, uh, bicycle

✓ They all like bicycles.

The sentence refers to bicycles in general, so use the plural noun bicycles rather than the singular pronoun it. The pronoun must agree in number with the thing being discussed.