Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ соответствует вопросу и содержит личную деталь, но начало «I would like to say» звучит излишне формально. Исправьте грамматику: используйте Past Simple «I fell» вместо «I have fell fell». Выражение «it didn’t stop» неясно — уточните, что именно не остановило вас от катания. Постарайтесь связать причину и результат естественно.

例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, and I loved riding it. I fell off about twenty times and got quite a few bruises, but that never stopped me from riding.

提案: Вы отвечаете на вопрос, но обобщение о популярности велосипедов противоречит уточнению, что на них ездят только дети. Уточните, насколько они популярны и среди кого. Исправьте формы: «among children», «adults usually drive» или «adults usually take», а не «adult people are usually ride». Используйте связку «while» для сравнения детей и взрослых.

例: Bikes are quite popular among children in my country, while most adults prefer to drive or take the bus. I think this is because many adults need a faster way to commute.

× Yes, I would like to say that I had a bike when I was a child and I really loved to ride on it, but I have fell fell twenty times and had bruises, but it didn't stop.

✓ Yes, I would like to say that I had a bike when I was a child and I really loved riding it, but I fell twenty times and had bruises. However, that didn't stop me.

The speaker is describing experiences from childhood, so the simple past fell is appropriate; have fell is incorrect in this past-time context. The repeated fell appears to be a spoken repetition and is removed. The phrase that didn't stop me makes clear that the falls and bruises did not prevent the speaker from riding.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country but only with child because adult people are usually ride a car or a bus but not a bike.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country, but only among children, because adults usually ride a car or a bus, but not a bike.

Child should be plural because the speaker is referring to children in general. Use children, the irregular plural of child. Adults is also the natural plural noun for adult people.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country but only with child because adult people are usually ride a car or a bus but not a bike.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country, but only among children, because adults usually ride a car or a bus, but not a bike.

The sentence describes a usual habit, so use the simple present ride. Are usually ride incorrectly combines the verb be with a base-form verb. Say usually ride, or use are usually riding if you mean an action happening around the present time.