Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也补充了自行车的颜色、来源和使用频率。注意回忆童年时应使用过去时，例如“I had”和“I rode”；“little tiny”意思重复，建议只保留一个形容词。“I almost ride it every day”表达不自然，可改为“I rode it almost every day”；“after eating my dinner”可简化为“after dinner”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was in kindergarten. My parents bought me a tiny pink one, and I loved it. I rode it almost every day after dinner.

提案: 回答直接，并用共享单车说明自行车在中国受欢迎，内容相关。注意可数名词复数应说“many shared bikes”；“sure bike”应为“shared bike”。“you know”略显多余，可以删去。建议进一步解释共享单车受欢迎的原因，并用连接词让理由更清晰。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. They’re convenient and affordable, so people often use them to get to work or school, particularly for short journeys.

× Yes I have AI had a bike when I was in kindergarten.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was in kindergarten.

这句话描述的是上幼儿园时的经历，应使用一般过去时。这里的“have”是现在时，应改为“had”。

× It's a pink little tiny 1.

✓ It's a tiny pink one.

英语中多个形容词通常按照“大小在颜色前”的顺序排列，因此应先说“tiny”，再说“pink”。这里的“1”按语境应为“one”。

× I almost ride it every day after eating my dinner.

✓ I rode it almost every day after eating my dinner.

这句话描述的是小时候经常骑车的习惯，应用一般过去时，所以“ride”应改为“rode”。

× I almost ride it every day after eating my dinner.

✓ I rode it almost every day after eating my dinner.

这里想表达“几乎每天”，应把“almost”放在“every day”前，组成“almost every day”。如果说“almost ride”，意思会变成“差一点骑上”。

× There are many shared bike in China.

✓ There are many shared bikes in China.

“many”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“bike”要改为“bikes”。