Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Use “bike” instead of “bag,” and say “ride my bike to school and back home.” Avoid repeating “when I was a child” and “in my childhood.” Your reason is relevant, but make the final point more natural by saying cycling helped you stay healthy.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school because my home was quite close. It was convenient, and it also helped me stay active.

提案: Your answer gives a relevant example, but correct the key phrase to “shared bikes” and use “on the road” or “around the city.” Check the names of the bike-sharing services, and say that they “belong to” a company or “are available through” an app. Split the long sentence into shorter, clearer sentences and use a linking phrase such as “For example.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in city centres. For example, people can rent one through a phone app and leave it at a nearby parking area. They’re convenient for short trips and can help reduce traffic.

× Yes, I have a bag when I am a child in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child in my childhood.

The question asks about a past period, so use the past-tense forms had and was rather than the present-tense forms have and am. When answering questions about childhood, keep the verbs describing that time in the past tense.

× I always take bikes to go to school and back to home.

✓ I always took bikes to go to school and back to home.

The student is describing a repeated action during childhood, so take should be in the past tense: took. Use the past tense when describing habits that happened in the past.

× I always take bikes to go to school and back to home.

✓ I always take bikes to go to school and back home.

The phrase back home does not take the preposition to. Use back home when describing returning to your home.

× Yes, I definitely think so because in my country nowadays we have many sheer bikes in the road some belong to the Olype and some are belong to Metuan which was an online app that can rent bikes for everyone.

✓ Yes, I definitely think so because in my country nowadays we have many sheer bikes on the road some belong to the Olype and some are belong to Metuan which was an online app that can rent bikes for everyone.

Use on the road rather than in the road when referring to bikes located on a road. Review which preposition naturally goes with the location you mean.

× Yes, I definitely think so because in my country nowadays we have many sheer bikes in the road some belong to the Olype and some are belong to Metuan which was an online app that can rent bikes for everyone.

✓ Yes, I definitely think so because in my country nowadays we have many sheer bikes in the road some belong to the Olype and some belong to Metuan which was an online app that can rent bikes for everyone.

Belong is an active verb and is not used in the passive voice, so are should not come before it. Say some belong to Metuan, not some are belong to Metuan.