Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也补充了父亲送自行车这一细节，但有明显的语法和表达问题：“when I six years old”应为“when I was six years old”；“gave me a gift as a bicycle”不自然，可改为“gave me a bicycle as a gift”。讲过去的经历时，动词时态应保持一致，例如用“liked”和“rode”。可以再补充一个具体细节，如骑车的地点或感受。

例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle as a gift when I was six, and I loved it. I rode it almost every day, usually around my neighbourhood.

提案: 回答直接，但“every family have”主谓不一致，应改为“every family has”；“they will ride it”用于描述日常习惯不够自然，可用“they ride them”或“people often ride bikes”。“每个家庭都有自行车”过于绝对，建议用“many families”或“bikes are quite popular”让表达更准确。可以补充一个具体原因，例如骑车方便或省钱。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. They are especially common in areas with less traffic.

× Yes, when I six years old, my father gave me a gift as a bicycle.

✓ Yes, when I was six years old, my father gave me a bicycle as a gift.

“When I six years old”缺少谓语动词。描述过去六岁时的状态，应在主语“I”后加过去式“was”，改为“When I was six years old”。

× Yes, when I six years old, my father gave me a gift as a bicycle.

✓ Yes, when I was six years old, my father gave me a bicycle as a gift.

“gave me a gift as a bicycle”中的“as”用法不恰当。要表达“父亲送了我一辆自行车作为礼物”，应说“gave me a bicycle as a gift”。

× Yes, in my country every family have a bicycle.

✓ Yes, in my country every family has a bicycle.

“every family”在语法上是单数主语，因此一般现在时的谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，不能用“have”。