Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın, ancak cevabın “I.” ile yarım kalmış. “When I was a child” ifadesinde “a” artikeli kullanılmalı. Cevabını tamamlamak için bisikletini ne zaman veya nerede kullandığını belirten kısa ve somut bir ayrıntı ekle.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: “Bikes” kelimesini doğru kullanmaya dikkat et; “bugs” farklı bir kelimedir. Ayrıca “in Turkey” denir, “in the Turkey” denmez. İlk cümlede soruya net cevap ver, ardından bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu kısa ve somut bir örnekle açıkla. “Learn to ride a bike” kalıbını kullan.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Turkey, especially among children. Many children learn to ride a bike in parks or quiet streets, and some people also use bikes for exercise.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child.

× Yes, the bugs is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Assuming bugs was intended to be bikes, the plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, not is.

× If you live in the Turkey and you a child, you want to learn bike, ride a bike.

✓ If you live in Turkey and you are a child, you want to learn to ride a bike.

Do not use the before the name of the country Turkey. Also, the phrase you a child is missing the verb are. Use learn to ride a bike to express the activity correctly.

× If you live in the Turkey and you a child, you want to learn bike, ride a bike.

✓ If you live in Turkey and you are a child, you want to learn to ride a bike.

The clause you a child has no verb. Add are to form the complete clause you are a child.