Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去的经历要用过去时：用“had a bike”和“rode my bike”，而不是“had a back”或“write a bag”。“when I was in middle school”比“in my middle school”更自然。删掉重复的“because”和句尾的填充词，并控制在两三句内。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to school when I was in middle school. My school was quite close to home, so cycling was a convenient way to get there.

提案: 回答方向明确，但需要使用准确的词汇：“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”表示共享单车；“ride a bike”表示骑车，不能说“write the bag”。说明共享单车为什么受欢迎，并用连接词组织理由和结果。注意主谓一致和表达自然度，例如用“people can scan a QR code”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can scan a QR code with their phones to unlock one, which is really convenient for short trips. They’re also widely available on city streets, so people can easily ride one to their destination.

× I usually, uh, write a bag to go to school when I was in my middle school.

✓ I usually rode a bike to school when I was in middle school.

句子中的“when I was in middle school”说明说的是过去，因此表示过去习惯的动作应使用过去式“rode”，不能用现在式“write”。这里“write a bag”也不符合“骑车上学”的语境；表达“骑自行车”应说“ride a bike”。建议先根据时间线索确定时态：过去的习惯可用“usually + 动词过去式”，例如“I usually rode …”。