Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer responds directly and includes a relevant detail. However, “reading with my friends to the park” does not fit the meaning; use “riding to the park with my friends.” Add a specific detail, such as where you went or what you did there, and keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, I did. I rode my bike almost every day because most children in my neighbourhood had one. I especially enjoyed riding to the park with my friends and exploring the trails there.

提案: You give several relevant reasons and examples, but repeated words and fillers (“uh,” “popular, popular”) make the answer less fluent. Use a more natural phrase such as “a popular destination for sports,” and correct “cycle a lot of both sports and everyday transport” to “cycle for both sport and everyday transport.” Connect your points smoothly and avoid repeating the same idea.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Kislovodsk, which is known for outdoor activities. People cycle both for exercise and as a convenient way to get around. There are also regular cycling events, so I often see cyclists on the streets.

× So, uh, people cycle a lot of both sports and everyday transport.

✓ So, uh, people cycle a lot, both for sport and for everyday transport.

The phrase 'a lot of' is not appropriate here because 'of' does not correctly connect 'cycle a lot' to the activities that follow. Use 'for' to explain the purposes of cycling. The revised sentence also uses 'both ... and ...' to connect the two purposes clearly.