Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the past simple for a completed event: “My brother bought me a bike.” Give a specific detail about how you used it. Also, clarify the age, since 16 or 17 may not match what you mean by “when you were a child.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was younger. My brother bought it for me when I was about 16, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Give a direct answer, then explain why bikes are popular with a specific reason or example. Use “the most suitable means of transport” rather than “the most suit means of transport,” and make sure the final sentence is complete.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They’re a convenient and affordable way to get around, especially in busy cities where traffic can be heavy.

× Yes, my brother had bought me a bike and I owned it when I was like sixteen to seventeen years old.

✓ Yes, my brother bought me a bike, and I owned it when I was about sixteen or seventeen years old.

The past perfect had bought usually describes an action that happened before another specified past event. No such past reference point is given here, so use the simple past bought. About sixteen or seventeen is also a clearer way to express an approximate age range.

× It's the most suit means of transport.

✓ They are the most suitable means of transport.

Suit is a verb, but this sentence needs an adjective to describe means of transport. Use suitable. They agrees with the plural noun bikes.