Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时描述童年经历：用 “I had” 而不是 “I have”。“The bike is my father both for me”表达不清楚；如果想说“爸爸买给我的”，应说 “My father bought it for me”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或感受。注意说 “after school”，不需要加 my。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I loved riding it with my friends after school. We often rode around our neighborhood.

提案: 回答观点后，用一到两个清楚的理由展开即可，避免重复表达“很多人骑车上学”，也尽量避免填充词和重复词。谈论普遍情况时用一般现在时；注意名词复数和搭配，例如 “bikes are popular” 和 “ride bikes to work or school”。可以补充骑车方便或省钱等具体原因。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. They are especially common for short journeys.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”说明这是过去的情况，因此应使用一般过去时。“have”的过去式是“had”。

× The bike is my father both for me.

✓ My father bought the bike for me.

原句的词语顺序和结构不完整，无法清楚表达意思。可以改为“My father bought the bike for me”，即“我父亲给我买了这辆自行车”。

× I always ride this bike with my friends after my school.

✓ I always rode this bike with my friends after school.

这段话描述的是小时候的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”。

× I always ride this bike with my friends after my school.

✓ I always rode this bike with my friends after school.

表示放学后这一日常活动时，通常说“after school”，不在“school”前加“my”。

× Yes, I think the bike is very popular in our country because many people will buy bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because many people will buy bikes to go to work or school.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，并与复数主语搭配使用“are”。“many people”后泛指多辆自行车时，也应使用复数“bikes”。

× Usually many median median uh many people will ride back go to school.

✓ Usually, many people ride bikes to school.

“Usually”表示通常发生的习惯性行为，宜使用一般现在时“ride”，而不是“will ride”。描述一般规律或习惯时，可使用“usually + 一般现在时”。

× Usually many median median uh many people will ride back go to school.

✓ Usually, many people ride bikes to school.

“ride back go to school”的动词结构不正确，且“back”在这里不能连接“ride”和“go”。可以用“ride bikes to school”直接表达“骑自行车上学”。