Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответьте прямо и используйте прошедшее время: вместо “I have” скажите “I had”. Разделите ответ на предложения и добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например как часто вы катались или почему вам нравился велосипед.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bike with pink flowers, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: Начните с чёткого ответа: “Yes, I think they are.” Исправьте порядок слов: скажите “Bikes are very popular in Russia”. Затем добавьте конкретную причину или пример. Избегайте неясного слова “Ifen”.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Russia, especially in warmer months. Many people ride them in parks or use them to get around their neighbourhoods.

× Yes I did I have a red bike with pink flowers

✓ Yes, I did. I had a red bike with pink flowers.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Separate the two complete thoughts with punctuation.

× Ifen Yes, in Russia very popular bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in Russia.

The original sentence is missing the verb are. In a statement about what is popular, use the pattern subject + are + adjective. Put the subject bikes before the verb and adjective.