Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自己的自行车，再说明你通常骑谁的车以及原因。注意使用过去时，例如“didn’t have”“rode”；“question”在这里可能应为“cousin”。答案目前在“Sometimes I”处中断，请补全句子，并控制在五句以内。

例: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I sometimes rode my cousin’s bike because his family had a few. I was always excited when he let me borrow one.

提案: 先明确回答“很受欢迎”，然后补充哪些人喜欢骑车以及具体原因。注意使用正确搭配，如“ride a bike”而不是“read a bicycle”，并用“helps them unwind”表达“帮助他们放松”。可以补充骑车的场景或益处，让理由更具体。

例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They often ride them in parks or along rivers because cycling is an enjoyable way to exercise and unwind.

× I usually ride the bike from my question.

✓ I usually rode the bike from my question.

这里是在讲小时候的经历，整段语境是过去时，因此应将一般现在时 ride 改为一般过去时 rode。“from my question”语义不清，可能是转写错误；由于这不属于所列语法问题类型，未作修改。

× Because it can make the more unwind.

✓ Because it can make them unwind more.

make 后面需要接宾语，指代前文的年轻人时应使用宾格代词 them，而不是定冠词 the。make + 宾语 + 动词原形的结构中，unwind 使用原形；more 放在 unwind 后面，表示“更放松地释放压力”。