Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer responds directly to the question, but it is very brief and repeats the auxiliary verb for emphasis unnecessarily. Add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike, how often you rode it, or where you used it.

例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Make your position clear without repeating yourself: use “I don’t think so” or “I think motorcycles are more popular,” rather than both. Use the plural “motorcycles,” avoid the broad claim that every household owns one, and support your comparison with a specific reason or example. Link your ideas smoothly with words such as “because” or “for example.”

例: I don’t think bicycles are as popular as motorcycles in my country. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for commuting across the city. For example, they can be useful when public transport is crowded.

× I don't think so I think motorcycle is more popular because everybody, every household has it and it's more convenient for people to travel around the city with motorcycle.

✓ I don't think so. I think motorcycles are more popular because every household has one, and they are more convenient for people to travel around the city.

The sentence joins two independent clauses, I don't think so and I think motorcycles are more popular, without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction. Separate them with a period. The repeated phrase everybody, every household is also unnecessary; use one clear subject.

× I don't think so I think motorcycle is more popular because everybody, every household has it and it's more convenient for people to travel around the city with motorcycle.

✓ I don't think so. I think motorcycles are more popular because every household has one, and they are more convenient for people to travel around the city.

Motorcycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article when used in the singular, as in a motorcycle. Since the statement refers to motorcycles in general, the plural form motorcycles is more natural and does not need an article. The phrase with motorcycle also needs an article or a plural noun; the revised sentence avoids that awkward construction.