Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但只有一个词，缺少具体信息，无法充分展开。建议先直接回答，再补充一两点细节，例如几岁开始骑、是否常骑，或和谁一起骑。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你表达了肯定观点，但有明显的用词和语法问题：“by”应为“bikes”；“my country”重复；“is so many people”和“In my country is very big”句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子说明自行车是否受欢迎，并给出具体原因或例子，例如通勤、锻炼或城市交通情况。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.

× Yes, I think by is popular in my country, my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

这里谈论的是自行车这一类事物，应用复数 bikes；复数主语应搭配 are。原句中的 “by” 应为 “bike”，并且要改成复数形式。回答时也无需重复 “my country”。

× Is so many people.

✓ There are so many people.

表示“有很多人”时，应使用 There be 句型。people 是复数，因此要用 are，而不是单独使用 Is。

× In my country is very big.

✓ My country is very big.

原句缺少主语，不能直接用介词短语 “In my country” 作句子的主语。可以用 “My country” 作主语，再接系动词 is。