Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly first, then give one clear reason or detail. Your response is difficult to understand because several phrases are incomplete or unrelated, such as “my children's children's historical.” Use past-tense language consistently and keep your answer to two or three clear sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked or played with my friends instead.

提案: Give a clear yes-or-no answer, then support it with a specific reason or example. The phrases “in my contract” and “my house have a brother” are unclear; use simple, accurate expressions such as “in my country” and “my brother owns a bike.” Check subject–verb agreement and plural forms, for example, “bikes are” and “he has.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for commuting and exercise. For example, my brother rides his bike to nearby places because it is convenient and inexpensive.

× I was child's

✓ I was a child

The singular countable noun child needs an article after was. Use a before child: I was a child.

× I didn't have a bikes.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The article a must be used with a singular noun, not the plural bikes. Say a bike.

× he have

✓ he has

In the present tense, use has with the third-person singular subject he. Have is used with I, you, we, and they.

× a money bikes

✓ many bikes

Many is the appropriate quantifier for the plural countable noun bikes. A money is not a suitable quantifier here; if the intended word was many, say many bikes.