Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one specific detail to make your response more developed. Use punctuation and avoid simply repeating the question.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I usually walked to school, and my parents thought it was safer for me.

提案: Give a clear reason or example to explain why bikes are popular. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since bicycles do not usually make a loud noise. Replace vague phrases such as “and everything” and “so yeah” with specific details.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them for short trips. They’re affordable and convenient, although I prefer walking because cycling in busy traffic can feel unsafe.