Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但内容过于简短，只有一个词，无法充分展示表达能力。建议先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑车、谁送的车，或骑车时的感受。注意控制在五句话以内。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 答案中“I aview seder bikes on the array”难以理解，影响表达清晰度；而且“我不这么认为”与后面“所以自行车在中国不受欢迎”的逻辑关系不够明确。建议用清楚的主题句回答，并用具体观察或原因支持观点。注意使用正确的复数形式 bikes。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and affordable. I often see them near subway stations.

× I don't think so I aview seder bikes on the array so the bike is not popular in China.

✓ I don't think so. I seldom see bikes on the road, so bikes are not popular in China.

“I don't think so”是一个完整句子，后面的“I seldom see...”应另起一句，不能直接用空格连接，否则会形成句子结构错误。这里用句号分隔两个完整句子；后半句中的“so”连接原因和结果。原文中“aview seder bikes on the array”疑似语音识别错误，按可能的意思整理为“I seldom see bikes on the road”。为保持前后复数一致，将泛指的“the bike”改为“bikes”。