Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and make sure you use the correct noun: “bike,” not “bag.” Use natural phrases such as “a birthday present” and “it reminds me of my childhood.” Add one clear supporting detail, and check verb tense and grammar (for example, “I loved it” and “it accompanied me”).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and I loved riding it around our neighbourhood. It brings back happy memories of my childhood.

提案: Give a direct answer using “bikes are quite popular,” then support it with one clear reason or example. Avoid repeating “but also” and unfinished phrases. You could explain that bikes are affordable, convenient, or useful for short journeys, and use a linking word such as “because.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities such as Norwich. They’re an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, and they can help people avoid traffic.

× I really love it because it company with my childhood.

✓ I really loved it because it accompanied me throughout my childhood.

The answer refers to a bike from the speaker’s childhood, so the past-tense form loved is more consistent with the past context. Accompanied is also the correct past-tense verb form; company is a noun and cannot function as the verb here.

× Yes, it's quite popular in my country, not only in Norwich but also in but also be before because it's a it's a basic transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a basic means of transportation.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural, so the answer should use the plural verb are and the pronoun they rather than it's. The original also contains repetitions and an unclear, incomplete phrase; this correction expresses the clear intended idea in a complete sentence.

× Yes, it's quite popular in my country, not only in Norwich but also in but also be before because it's a it's a basic transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a basic means of transportation.

Transportation is generally an uncountable noun, so it should not be preceded directly by a. The phrase a basic means of transportation is grammatical because means is a countable noun.