Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，例如用“Yes, I did.”；注意过去时应使用“had”“bought”和“rode”，而不是“have”“booked”和“ride”。“bike”不要误说成“back”。避免重复和自我修正，并用一个具体细节补充说明，例如骑车的地点或感受。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, and I rode it with my friends every weekend. We usually cycled around our neighbourhood, which was a lot of fun.

提案: 开头直接表明观点是好的，但“go to job”不自然，应改为“go to work”。“many people will ride”可改为一般现在时“many people ride”，描述常见习惯。不要重复“go to a job”和“go to work”，并补全结尾；可以具体说明哪些人骑车或骑车的原因。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in busy cities. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× Yes I have a back when when I was a child this bike was my parents booked for me and I ride it with my friends in every on every Saturday and Sunday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. This bike was bought for me by my parents, and I rode it with my friends every Saturday and Sunday.

问题描述的是“小时候”的经历，属于过去，所以要把 have 改为 had。后面表示过去骑车的动作，也要把 ride 改为 rode。讲述过去发生的事情时，注意相关动词通常都要使用过去式。

× This bike was my parents booked for me.

✓ This bike was bought for me by my parents.

被动语态的结构是“be 动词 + 过去分词 + by + 动作执行者”。原句中 was 后面直接接 my parents booked，结构不正确。可以改成 was bought，并用 by my parents 表示“由我的父母购买”。

× I ride it with my friends in every on every Saturday and Sunday.

✓ I rode it with my friends every Saturday and Sunday.

表示“每个星期六和星期天”时，every 前面不需要加介词。可以说 every Saturday and Sunday；如果使用 on，则说 on Saturdays and Sundays。不要把 in 和 on 重复使用。

× Many people will ride bikes to go to job, go to work or go to school.

✓ Many people ride bikes to go to work or school.

这里是在说明人们通常如何出行，是一般情况，不是将来会发生的事情，因此不应使用 will ride。一般性事实通常用一般现在时 ride。

× Many people will ride bikes to go to job, go to work or go to school.

✓ Many people ride bikes to go to work or school.

job 是可数名词单数，单独使用时通常需要限定词，例如 a job 或 their jobs。更自然的表达是 go to work，表示“去上班”，因此可以直接说 go to work or school。