Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提供了买车的时间和与姐姐一起骑车的细节。注意讲过去经历时统一使用过去时：将“have”改为“had”，“use”改为“used”；“learn how to ride bikes”在这里不自然，可说“learn how to ride”。避免重复使用“and”，可以用“so”或“also”连接，并将“use it with my sister together”改为“ride it with my sister”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought it for me when I was about ten, and I used it to learn how to ride. I also enjoyed riding it with my sister.

提案: 需要更直接地回答自行车在本国是否受欢迎，并说明受欢迎的原因或举出具体例子。当前句子缺少完整的主句；“participate some”应为“take part in some”，“I have participate”应为“I participated”或“I have participated”。把“cycling around Taiwan activity”换成更自然的“a cycling trip around Taiwan”，并用连接词拆分过长的句子。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Taiwan, especially for exercise and sightseeing. For example, I once went on a cycling trip around the island with my classmates. I found it enjoyable, and it’s a great way to explore the scenery.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的过去情况，应用一般过去时。have 应改为过去式 had。

× My mum bought me a new bike when I was about ten years old and I use it to learn how to ride bikes and I can use it with my sister together.

✓ My mum bought me a new bike when I was about ten years old, and I used it to learn how to ride a bike. I could ride it with my sister.

整句话描述的是过去发生的事情，因此 use 应改为过去式 used。调整后的句子也用 a bike 表示学习骑自行车；这属于表达调整，不是额外的语法问题。

× My mum bought me a new bike when I was about ten years old and I use it to learn how to ride bikes and I can use it with my sister together.

✓ My mum bought me a new bike when I was about ten years old, and I used it to learn how to ride a bike. I could ride it with my sister.

这里说的是小时候能够和姐姐／妹妹一起骑车，描述过去的能力应使用 could，而不是表示现在能力的 can。

× Yes, some people who like to participate some bike activities together and I have participate in a cycling around Taiwan activity with my school classmates and I think it was interesting.

✓ Yes, some people like to participate in bike activities together, and I have participated in a cycling activity around Taiwan with my school classmates. I think it was interesting.

participate 后面接活动时需要介词 in，因此应说 participate in bike activities。

× Yes, some people who like to participate some bike activities together and I have participate in a cycling around Taiwan activity with my school classmates and I think it was interesting.

✓ Yes, some people like to participate in bike activities together, and I have participated in a cycling activity around Taiwan with my school classmates. I think it was interesting.

原句以“some people who like...”开头，但这个部分只是名词短语，缺少完整的主句谓语；它又直接与后面的“I have...”连接，导致句子结构不完整。可改成“some people like...”，使其成为完整分句，并用逗号和 and 连接后面的分句。

× Yes, some people who like to participate some bike activities together and I have participate in a cycling around Taiwan activity with my school classmates and I think it was interesting.

✓ Yes, some people like to participate in bike activities together, and I have participated in a cycling activity around Taiwan with my school classmates. I think it was interesting.

现在完成时的结构是 have/has 加过去分词。participate 的过去分词是 participated，因此应说 have participated。