Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，注意使用过去时，例如“had”。“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”，“ride bike”应改为“rode a bike”。后半段意思不清楚，建议只补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途或你和朋友骑车的经历，避免加入难以表达的内容。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright red Giant bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed those rides because they made me feel independent.

提案: 回答方向明确，但开头的“No”与后面的观点衔接不够自然，可以直接说汽车比自行车更受欢迎。用“cars”和“bikes”表达泛指；“very huge”可换成“large”。说明骑车耗时后，应补完与汽车的对比，并给出完整句子。注意答案不要在句中结束。

例: Bikes are not as popular as cars in my country, especially in large cities. Distances can be quite long, so cycling to work or school may take a lot of time. Many people prefer driving because it is faster and more convenient.

× Yes, I have a bike, you know, in my child, I have a ride bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, you know. I had a bike to ride.

问题询问的是童年时期的情况，因此应使用过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。

× Yes, I have a bike, you know, in my child, I have a ride bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, you know. I had a bike to ride.

表示“在我小时候”时，不能说 in my child。可以说 when I was a child。

× It's a giant bike.

✓ It was a giant bike.

这里继续描述童年时的自行车，应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is。

× This bike speech is very quickly.

✓ This bike's speed is very quick.

系动词 is 后面应使用形容词 quick 描述速度，不能使用副词 quickly。

× No, in my country, maybe car is more popular than bike because my city is very huge and my country is very huge too.

✓ No, in my country, maybe cars are more popular than bikes because my city is very huge and my country is very huge too.

这里泛指汽车和自行车这两类事物，应使用复数 cars 和 bikes。复数主语 cars 后面的 be 动词也应使用 are。

× So if you use the bike, ride a bike, go to your school or go to your work office, maybe it's waste a lot of time.

✓ So, if you ride a bike to school or work, it wastes a lot of time.

it 是第三人称单数，作主语时，表示“浪费”的一般现在时动词应使用 wastes。it's 表示 it is，不能直接接动词原形 waste。