Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-21 12:25:56

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

I have a buy when you win a chill.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Yes, I think by a population in Japan.

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 15.0

提案: Câu trả lời chưa rõ nghĩa, có thể do phát âm khiến người nghe khó nhận ra các từ “had a bike” và “when I was a child”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn thường đi xe ở đâu hoặc dùng xe để làm gì.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 20.0

提案: Bạn đã trả lời “Yes” nhưng phần sau chưa diễn đạt rõ ý và chưa trả lời chính xác về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp. Hãy dùng cấu trúc “I think bikes are popular...” rồi nêu một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Nếu muốn nói về Nhật Bản, hãy diễn đạt rõ đó là quốc gia bạn đang nhắc đến.

例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and easy to park.

文法

5: Past tense issue

× I have a buy when you win a chill.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Use was, not win, to describe the student's past state. The correction also interprets buy and chill as bike and child to make the intended answer clear.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think by a population in Japan.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan.

The original sentence does not contain a complete clause after I think. Use the subject bikes with the verb are and the adjective popular to express the idea clearly.

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