Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提到了父亲教你骑车的个人经历。注意说“when I was a child”，child 前需要加冠词 a；“helped me learn”更简洁自然。可以补充一个具体细节，例如学会骑车的年龄或当时的感受。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about six, and my father taught me how to ride it. I was a little nervous at first, but I felt proud when I could ride on my own.

提案: 先直接回答问题，然后用一到两个清晰的理由或例子展开。原回答中的“the bikes”应改为“bikes”，“more and more people they use”应改为“more and more people use”；“e-bikes, electric bikes”意思重复，而且句子在“there are”处没有完成。提到过去的年代时要说明与现在的联系，否则会显得不相关。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short commutes because they are convenient and inexpensive. Electric bikes have also become more common in recent years.

× I did have a bike when I was child and I remember my father helped me to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child, and I remember my father helped me to learn how to ride a bike.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里指“一个孩子”，应使用不定冠词“a”。

× Yes the bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the nineteen fifties or sixties and nowadays more and more people they use e bikes, electric bikes and also there are

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the 1950s or 1960s, and nowadays more and more people they use e-bikes, electric bikes, and also there are

这里泛指自行车，不是指前文提到的某些特定自行车，因此复数名词“bikes”前不应使用定冠词“the”。

× Yes the bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the nineteen fifties or sixties and nowadays more and more people they use e bikes, electric bikes and also there are

✓ Yes, the bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the 1950s or 1960s, and nowadays more and more people use e-bikes, electric bikes, and also there are

“more and more people”已经是句子的主语，后面不需要再用“they”重复主语。应直接说“more and more people use”。

× Yes the bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the nineteen fifties or sixties and nowadays more and more people they use e bikes, electric bikes and also there are

✓ Yes, bikes were very popular in my country, especially in the 1950s or 1960s, and nowadays more and more people use e-bikes, electric bikes, and also there are

“the 1950s or 1960s”指过去的年代，因此描述那段时间的流行情况时应使用过去时“were”。与“nowadays”对应的现状则使用现在时“are”或“use”。