Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Keep the verb tense consistent when talking about childhood: use “loved,” “owned,” and “rode.” The phrase “this tap or hybrid bike” is unclear; use “a type of hybrid bike” if that is what you mean. Avoid repeating the same idea about riding.

例: Yes, I had a hybrid bike when I was a child. I loved riding it because I could use it on both roads and trails. I rode it several times a week, especially during the summer.

提案: Make your answer clear and grammatically accurate. Say “bicycles are quite popular” rather than “it’s quite popular,” and use “Myanmar” if that is the country you mean. Replace unclear phrases such as “one of the main commute” and “white heavy traffic” with “a common way to commute” and “avoid heavy traffic.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as who uses bikes or where they are common.

例: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in Myanmar, especially in smaller towns. They’re a common way for people to commute because they’re affordable and easy to use. They can also help people avoid traffic on busy roads.

× I really love biking when I was a child.

✓ I really loved biking when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a period of time in the past, indicated by when I was a child, so the past-tense form loved is needed. Use the past tense for actions or feelings that belong to a finished period in the past.

× I own this tap or hybrid bike.

✓ I owned this type of hybrid bike.

The answer is about a bike the student had as a child, so owned is more consistent with the past-time context than own. Use the past tense when describing something you possessed in the past.

× I'm from Mymar riding bicycles bicycles.

✓ I'm from Myanmar, where people ride bicycles.

The original wording does not form a clear, complete sentence: riding bicycles bicycles is an incomplete and repeated phrase. Connect the idea to the main clause with where people ride bicycles. Also, Myanmar is the standard spelling of the country name.

× It's one of the main commute in our country.

✓ It's one of the main ways to commute in our country.

After one of the, the following noun should be plural. The original uses the singular commute; ways is plural and makes the phrase grammatical. Use one of the + plural noun.