Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense: say “I had,” not “I have.” Use the natural phrase “when I was a child,” and add one clear detail about the bike or how you used it. The phrase “on iron child” is unclear, so avoid it or replace it with the detail you mean.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Give a clear answer first, then explain your opinion with one or two relevant reasons. Use “bicycles” or “bikes” consistently, and choose the correct comparison—for example, whether they are more popular in cities or in the countryside. Avoid unclear phrases such as “this fight” and “from whatever formats.”

例: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people prefer cars or public transport because they are more convenient for commuting. However, bicycles are still common in some smaller towns and rural areas.

× Yes, I have bike on iron child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use had rather than have. Use the past form was to describe the time when you were a child.

× Yes, I have bike on iron child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike.

× Yes, I have bike on iron child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase on iron child does not form a clear or grammatical expression. To state when you had the bike, use the clause when I was a child.

× No, no. And at this day this fight will be not popular as the country more and maybe village or the traditional town because there are no more car and truck and a a sport car from whatever formats.

✓ No, not really. These days, bikes are not very popular in my country, especially in villages and traditional towns, because there are more cars, trucks, and sports cars of various kinds.

The question asks about bikes' popularity now, so use the present tense are, not the future form will be. These days is a natural expression for talking about the present.

× No, no. And at this day this fight will be not popular as the country more and maybe village or the traditional town because there are no more car and truck and a a sport car from whatever formats.

✓ No, not really. These days, bikes are not very popular in my country, especially in villages and traditional towns, because there are more cars, trucks, and sports cars of various kinds.

When referring to cars, trucks, and sports cars generally, use plural nouns. Also, bikes is plural, so it takes the plural verb are.

× No, no. And at this day this fight will be not popular as the country more and maybe village or the traditional town because there are no more car and truck and a a sport car from whatever formats.

✓ No, not really. These days, bikes are not very popular in my country, especially in villages and traditional towns, because there are more cars, trucks, and sports cars of various kinds.

The original sentence has unclear and incomplete phrases, including at this day and as the country more. Use these days to refer to the present and especially in villages and traditional towns to make the comparison clear.