Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not clearly respond to the question, and “I don't have vitamin” is not a natural phrase in this context. Use the past tense to say whether you owned a bike as a child, then add a brief reason or detail. For example, you could mention whether you rode a family member’s bike instead.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked or played with my friends nearby.

提案: You answer the question directly, but the sentence is unfinished and “everyone” is an overgeneralization. Complete your explanation with a specific reason or example, and use a linking word to make the answer flow naturally. Keep your response concise.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Pakistan, especially in busy cities. They’re relatively affordable and convenient for getting around, although traffic can sometimes make riding stressful.

× No, I don't have vitamin. I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a vitamin. I was a child.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have to match the past-time context.

× No, I don't have vitamin. I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a vitamin. I was a child.

Vitamin is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before vitamin. The word vitamin may not fit the question about bikes, but changing it would be a vocabulary correction, not a grammar correction.