Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一个清楚、相关的细节。原回答中的“but I can't but I didn't study”表达混乱，而且时态不一致；如果想表达不敢骑，可以说“wasn't confident riding it”。避免重复和自我修正。

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t very confident riding it, so I usually practised with my family.

提案: 开头的“Sometimes”与后面“everywhere”所表达的意思不一致，建议明确回答“是”或“不是”。后面的“we can see them everywhere”反复出现，可以删去重复内容，并补充具体例子或原因，例如通勤、短途出行或共享单车。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. People often ride them to work or use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× I have a blue bike but I can't but I didn't study because I am not brave.

✓ I had a blue bike, but I couldn't; I didn't study because I wasn't brave.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，应使用过去时。表示“有”要把 have 改为 had；表示“不是”要把 am 改为 was。can't 在这里也应使用过去形式 couldn't。

× I have a blue bike but I can't but I didn't study because I am not brave.

✓ I had a blue bike, but I couldn't; I didn't study because I wasn't brave.

can't 表示现在的能力或可能性，而这里讲的是小时候的情况，因此应使用过去式 couldn't。若想表达“我不会骑”，需要补充具体动作，例如 couldn't ride it；但原句没有明确说出该动作，所以不应擅自添加。

× Sometimes And I think they are popular because everywhere we can see that. We can see them every time every every year, we can see them everywhere.

✓ Sometimes, I think they are popular because we can see them everywhere. We can see them every year.

表示地点的副词 everywhere 通常放在动词及其宾语之后，因此应说 we can see them everywhere，而不是 everywhere we can see them。every time every every year 属于重复且不自然的表达；如果想表达“每年”，说 every year 即可。

× Sometimes And I think they are popular because everywhere we can see that. We can see them every time every every year, we can see them everywhere.

✓ Sometimes, I think they are popular because we can see them everywhere. We can see them every year.

这里谈论的是复数名词 bikes，因此作宾语时应使用复数代词 them，而不是 that。可以说 we can see them everywhere，表示“我们到处都能看到自行车”。