Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the correct past-tense form: “Yes, I did.” Clarify that the Access 125 belonged to your mother, and avoid repeating “go.” Add one specific detail about where or when you rode it. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

例: Yes, I did. My mother had an Access 125 scooter, and I sometimes rode with her when we went to playdates or restaurants. I especially enjoyed those rides because they felt exciting when I was a child.

提案: State clearly that bikes are popular, then give a clear reason or example. Replace unclear phrases such as “much more than required” and “we people are called” with natural wording. Avoid repeating “because,” and explain what you mean by saying cars “can’t compete”—for example, bikes are easier to park or move through traffic.

例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are convenient in heavy traffic and easier to park than cars. Some people also enjoy taking evening rides for fun.

× Yes I did had a bike in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

After the auxiliary did, use the base form of the verb: did have, not did had. You can also answer with Yes, I did, then state the past fact using had.

× My mother owns one Access 125 and we used to ride that bike and we left to go to go on play dates or restaurants on it.

✓ My mother owns an Access 125, and we used to ride it to go on play dates or to restaurants.

The phrase go to go repeats the same verb unnecessarily, and left does not fit the intended meaning of a repeated past activity. Use used to ride ... to go to express a past habit and its purpose.

× ...go on play dates or restaurants on it.

✓ ...go on play dates or to restaurants on it.

Use on with the expression go on a play date, but use to with the destination restaurants. Keep the appropriate preposition for each destination.

× ...we love to ride our bikes, do a late night driving it...

✓ ...we love to ride our bikes and drive them late at night...

Do a late night driving is not a well-formed verb phrase in this sentence. Use parallel verb forms after love to: ride and drive. The revised phrase also expresses the activity directly.

× ...we love to ride our bikes, do a late night driving it...

✓ ...we love to ride our bikes and drive them late at night...

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them to agree with the plural noun bikes.