Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Uh, of course, yes. When I had, when I was a child, my parents bought me, bought me a bike and they, they wanted me to, uh, to be able to ride a bike.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Definitely, yes. Uh, in my country, most children have their, most children have their, their own bike and when they was young and every, uh, parents want their children to, uh, can, can ride a bike in order to, uh, practice skill.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 45.0提案: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm thông tin về việc bố mẹ mua xe cho bạn. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có nhiều từ lặp và ngập ngừng; “When I had” chưa đúng cấu trúc trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy dùng câu mở đầu trực tiếp, sau đó nêu một chi tiết cụ thể như độ tuổi hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp xe. Có thể nói “learn to ride a bike” thay vì “be able to ride a bike” để diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.
例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me my first bike when I was about six because they wanted me to learn how to ride. I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 40.0提案: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp rằng xe đạp phổ biến, nhưng phần giải thích còn khó hiểu do lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sửa “they was” thành “they are” hoặc “they were”, và dùng “parents want their children to learn to ride” thay cho “want their children to can ride”. “Practice skill” cũng chưa tự nhiên; có thể nói “develop their coordination” hoặc đơn giản là “learn a useful skill”. Nên bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể về cách trẻ em sử dụng xe đạp.
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many parents buy their children a bike so they can learn to ride and become more independent. You can often see children cycling in parks or around their neighborhoods.
文法
× when they was young
✓ when they are young
The subject they takes the plural verb are, not was. Because the sentence describes a general situation, use the present tense: when they are young.
× every parents want their children
✓ all parents want their children
Every must be followed by a singular noun, as in every parent. Since parents is plural here, use the quantifier all: all parents.
× their children to can ride a bike
✓ their children to be able to ride a bike
A modal verb such as can cannot directly follow to. Use to be able to instead, or remove to and say can ride.
× practice skill
✓ practice their riding skills
In this context, skill is more naturally expressed in the plural because children develop and practice riding skills. Use skills, with their to show whose skills they are.
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