Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın ve bisikletin rengiyle ilgili bir ayrıntı eklemişsin. Ancak cevap biraz kısa; bisikleti ne zaman kullandığını veya onunla ilgili bir anını ekleyerek daha özgün ve gelişmiş hâle getirebilirsin. “Very cute” doğal olsa da bisikletin görünüşünü daha belirgin anlatan bir ifade kullanabilirsin.

例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child, and I thought it looked adorable. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends.

提案: Fikrini belirtmişsin ve bisiklet yollarının yetersizliğini neden olarak sunmuşsun; bu iyi bir başlangıç. Ancak “No, not actually” yerine “Not really” daha doğal olur. “There is no bike road suitable” ifadesini “there aren’t enough suitable bike lanes” şeklinde düzelt; “ride back” bu bağlamda uygun değil, “ride a bike” kullan. Otobüs ve metro örneklerini daha düzgün bağla ve cevabını en fazla birkaç cümlede tut.

例: Not really, because there aren’t enough safe and suitable bike lanes in my country. As a result, many people prefer using public transport, such as buses or the subway, instead of riding a bike.

× In my country there is no bike road suitable.

✓ In my country, there are no suitable bike lanes.

The sentence refers to the lack of bike lanes in general, so the plural form bike lanes is more appropriate. Use the plural verb are with this plural subject.

× In my country there is no bike road suitable.

✓ In my country, there are no suitable bike lanes.

The there be construction must agree with the noun that follows it. Since bike lanes is plural, use there are rather than there is.

× We have to use public transport, maybe bus or subway.

✓ We have to use public transport, maybe by bus or subway.

Use by before bus or subway to show the means of transportation. The phrases by bus and by subway are standard.