Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 开头把“bike”说成了“bag”，会影响回答的准确性，建议直接回答“Yes, I did.”。注意语法：表达过去习惯用“my mom accompanied me”，或用“my mom would accompany me”；“at weekend”应改为“at weekends”，并保持动词形式一致。可以补充骑车的地点或感受，让细节更自然。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was young, and my mom often rode with me around our neighborhood after school or at weekends. I really enjoyed those rides because they were a fun way to spend time together.

提案: 回答切题，也给出了共享单车和通勤场景作为理由。建议去掉口语填充词“lah”和“uh”，并把“shearing bike”改为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing schemes”。“then go walk”不自然，可以说“then take the subway”；另外，“from their home”可改为“from home”。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. Many people ride them from home to the nearest subway station and then continue their journey by train. They’re convenient and relatively inexpensive, particularly for short trips.

× my mom always accompany me

✓ my mom always accompanied me

这句话描述的是小时候的经历，前文也使用了过去时“had”和“bought”，因此这里应使用过去式“accompanied”，不能用原形“accompany”。建议叙述过去经历时保持动词时态一致。

× my mom always accompany me and riding the bike in my neighborhood

✓ my mom always accompanied me and rode bikes with me in my neighborhood

“accompanied me”和后面的动作由同一个主语“my mom”并列连接，动词形式应保持平行。这里不能用“riding”；结合过去的语境，应改为过去式“rode”。

× at weekend or after school

✓ on weekends or after school

表示“在周末”时，通常用介词“on”，并常说“on weekends”。建议记住固定搭配“on weekends”；“after school”则不需要改动。

× we have a lot of shearing bike

✓ we have a lot of shared bikes

“a lot of”后面接可数名词时，名词应使用复数形式，因此“bike”要改为“bikes”。这里用“shared bikes”表达“共享单车”。