Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过于简短，没有补充细节。可以再说明你什么时候骑车、骑车的地点，或你是否喜欢骑车。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，但后半句有较多语法和表达错误，原因也不清楚。注意说“bikes are”，并用清楚的理由解释，例如自行车有益健康、方便或环保。补充一个具体场景会让回答更完整。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a convenient and healthy way to get around. For example, many people ride them to work or use them for exercise.

× Yes, I think bike are popular in our countries because she because the can healthy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they can help people stay healthy.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数 bikes；复数主语与 are 搭配。问题问的是“你们国家”，用 my country 更符合学生从个人角度作答的语境。

× Yes, I think bike are popular in our countries because she because the can healthy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they can help people stay healthy.

she 通常指女性，不能用来指代自行车。这里可用 they 指代复数 bikes。回答时应确保代词与它所指代的名词一致。

× Yes, I think bike are popular in our countries because she because the can healthy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they can help people stay healthy.

情态动词 can 后面需要接动词原形，不能直接接形容词 healthy。这里改为 can help people stay healthy，其中 help 是动词原形。