Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否拥有自行车；再补充一个具体细节，例如什么时候骑或骑车做什么。注意使用过去时：说童年经历用“when I was a child”，表达喜欢用“I liked”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 先明确表示自行车是否受欢迎，再给出清楚、合理的原因。避免“go to school is should buy bike”这类语法错误；可以说学生骑车上学很方便，并补充其他常见用途。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because they are convenient and affordable. People also use bikes for short trips around town.

× Of course when I children I I am very like a by bike.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I really liked riding a bike.

这里说的是童年时期的经历，因此要用过去时。应把“am”改为“was”，并把“like”改为“liked”。描述过去喜欢做某事，可以说“liked riding a bike”。

× Of course when I children I I am very like a by bike.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I really liked riding a bike.

“I”后面描述一个人，应使用单数名词“child”，并且通常说“a child”，不能说“I children”。注意“child”的复数形式是“children”，但此处指一个人。

× Yes, of course. Umm, because many people go to school is should buy bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Many people who go to school should buy bikes.

情态动词“should”前不能再加“is”。“should”后面应直接接动词原形，所以应说“should buy”。建议记住“should + 动词原形”的结构。

× Yes, of course. Umm, because many people go to school is should buy bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Many people who go to school should buy bikes.

主语是复数概念“many people”，这里泛指多人购买自行车，因此“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。