Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 这句话没有回答考官的问题，可能是没有听清或误解了问题。先确认问题是在问你小时候有没有自行车，然后直接回答“Yes”或“No”。接着补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途，或你通常在哪里骑。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood.

提案: 你表达了“自行车很方便”的想法，但句子不完整，语法和衔接也不清楚。先直接回答“是”或“不是”，再说明原因，并用一个具体例子支撑观点。注意说完整句，例如“Bikes are convenient because people can ride them to school or work.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient and affordable. For example, many students ride them to school, especially if they live nearby.

× I'm sorry like a very convenient in my life if students can. Take a bike, go to school and. People can.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient. Students can ride them to school.

原句的句子结构不完整：“like a very convenient”缺少明确的主语和完整谓语；“if students can”没有说清学生能做什么；“Take a bike, go to school and”以及“People can”都是未完成的句子。可以先用完整句表达观点，再用主语、谓语齐全的句子补充原因，例如“Students can ride them to school”。