Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
I did have a bike when I was a child. I was not good at it. Umm. My bike was really small, but I liked it.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Well, let's say, well, let's say pretty much because when I was a child, almost every of my friends had a bike and we were riding, riding them together. So even once I I fall down and broke my leg, but then I was still riding my bike.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 68.0提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsun ve bisikletin küçük olduğunu belirterek bir ayrıntı veriyorsun. Ancak “I did have” yerine daha doğal olan “I had” ifadesini kullanabilirsin. “I was not good at it” ifadesinde neyi kastettiğini netleştirerek bisiklet sürmekte iyi olmadığını söyle. “Umm” gibi dolgu sözcüklerini çıkar ve düşüncelerini kısa, akıcı cümlelerle bağla.
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite small, and I wasn’t very good at riding it at first. Still, I really enjoyed using it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 48.0提案: “Pretty much” tek başına bu soruya net bir yanıt vermiyor; ülkenizde bisikletlerin popüler olup olmadığını doğrudan belirt. “Almost every of my friends” yerine “almost all my friends” kullan. Tekrarlanan ifadeleri ve “I I”, “riding, riding” gibi tekrarları çıkar. Çocukluk anın ilgi çekici olsa da ülkenizdeki yaygınlığı açıklamıyor; günümüzde insanların bisiklet kullanma nedenleri veya kullanım alanları hakkında somut bir ayrıntı ekle. Geçmişteki olay için “I fell and broke my leg” demelisin.
例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. When I was young, almost all my friends had a bike, and we often rode around together. These days, some people also use bikes to exercise or travel short distances.
文法
× Almost every of my friends had a bike.
✓ Almost all of my friends had a bike.
Use almost all of before a plural noun phrase. Every is used with a singular countable noun, as in almost every friend.
× So even once I I fall down and broke my leg, but then I was still riding my bike.
✓ So even once, I fell down and broke my leg, but then I was still riding my bike.
The story is about a past event, so use the past-tense form fell rather than the present-tense form fall. The correction also removes the repeated I, which is a spoken repetition rather than a grammar error.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)