Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中把“bike”说成了“bag”，导致内容与问题不符。注意使用过去时“had”，并明确回答是否有自行车。可以补充自行车的颜色或骑车经历；例如用“because”说明喜欢它的原因。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was black, and I really liked it because I could ride it around my neighbourhood.

提案: 回答方向正确，但多次把“bikes”说成“bags”，而且“backers”不是这里合适的词。请使用“bikes”或“bicycles”，避免重复“most people”，并用一个具体原因或例子支持观点。注意句子之间可用“because”或“for example”衔接。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for short journeys because they are affordable and convenient. For example, students often cycle to school.

× Yes, I have a bag when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此“have”也应使用过去式“had”。描述过去拥有某物时，使用“had”。

× Yes, of course in my country, most people can ride a bag and and most people have bags.

✓ Yes, of course, in my country, most people can ride a bag, and most people have bags.

“and”被重复使用了一次，造成连词重复。连接两个并列内容时保留一个“and”即可。

× So the backers are popular in my country.

✓ So backers are popular in my country.

这里是在泛指一类事物，并不是指前文提到的特定一群“backers”，所以不需要使用定冠词“the”。