Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ начинается прямо, но в нём есть ошибки, мешающие понять смысл: «bag» означает «сумка», а не «велосипед»; для прошлого используйте «had» и «was», а не «have» и «am». Не повторяйте «child». Добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например цвет велосипеда или то, где вы на нём катались.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Выражайте мнение естественной конструкцией «bikes are popular», а не «bike is the popularity». Используйте множественное число, поскольку речь идёт о велосипедах в целом, и добавьте конкретную причину или пример — например, что люди ездят на них на работу или в школу.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many people ride them to work or school.

× Yes, I have a bag when I am a child child.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child child.

The question asks about a time in the past, so use the past-tense forms had and was. The repeated word child and the use of bag instead of bike are not corrected because they are outside the listed grammar problem types.

× Yes, bike is the popularity in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Use the plural noun bikes to talk about bikes generally. The verb must also agree with this plural subject, so use are. The corrected sentence also uses the adjective popular, which describes bikes; popularity is a noun.

× Yes, bike is the popularity in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Popular is the adjective needed to describe bikes. Popularity is a noun, so it does not fit after the verb are in this sentence. Use popular when describing something as widely liked or commonly used.