Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过短。可以补充一个具体细节，例如说明原因，或说说当时是否想要一辆自行车。

例: No, I didn’t. My family didn’t have much space to store one, so I usually played outdoors with my friends instead.

提案: 先直接回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，再补充具体人群或使用场景。避免重复和自我修正；注意用“many children want”表达一般情况，并将“childrenhood”改为“childhood”。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children, because they’re fun and convenient for getting around parks and neighborhoods.

× Yes, I think many children were many I think many children want to have a bike in their childrenhood.

✓ Yes, I think many children want to have a bike when they are children.

原句中的“many children were many”结构不完整，后面又重复了“I think many children”，导致句子结构混乱。表达完整观点时，保留一个主句即可。可以用“when they are children”表示“在他们还是孩子的时候”。

× Yes, I think many children were many I think many children want to have a bike in their childrenhood.

✓ Yes, I think many children want to have a bike when they are children.

题目询问自行车在当前是否受欢迎，回答的是一般情况，因此应使用一般现在时。原句中的“were”是过去式，与当前的一般情况不一致；改为“are”或直接使用“when they are children”更合适。