Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it. Give a direct yes-or-no response, then add one brief detail, such as who bought the bike or how you used it.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: You answered the question and gave a reason, but some expressions are unclear or unnatural, and the final thought is repeated and unfinished. Use a clear phrase such as “a popular means of transport,” check singular and plural forms (for example, “motorcycles”), and connect your reason with a linking word. Finish with one specific detail and keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially motorcycles, because they’re an affordable way to get around. They’re convenient in busy cities, and they use less fuel than cars, so people can save money on their daily journeys.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country, especially in the mode of transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, especially as a mode of transportation.

Use as to describe the role bikes serve. In this context, in the mode of transportation is not the appropriate preposition phrase.

× We use chipneys, motorcycle and bikes.

✓ We use chipneys, motorcycles, and bikes.

The list refers to types of vehicles in general, so motorcycle should be plural to match the other plural items.

× We can go from one place to another easily also bike doesn't cost you a lot of gasoline so you don't have to pay for extra you don't have to pay for

✓ We can go from one place to another easily. Also, bikes do not use much gasoline, so you do not have to pay as much for fuel.

The original combines several complete ideas without punctuation, creating a run-on sentence, and ends with an incomplete phrase. Separate the ideas with appropriate punctuation and finish the final thought. Use a complete sentence when explaining that bikes are economical.