Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense: say whether you had a bike as a child. Avoid repeating “I used to,” and correct the tense and missing verb in “when I at home” (say “when I was at home”). Add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or what you enjoyed about it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood in my free time, especially when I was at home during the holidays.

提案: Give a clear yes-or-no answer first, then explain your view with a relevant reason or example. Avoid repeating “my country” and do not introduce athletes unless you can clearly connect them to cycling’s popularity. Use a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example” to make your answer easier to follow.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic can be heavy. For example, many people cycle to work or school because it is affordable and convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I chat.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, so use the past-tense verb had rather than the present-tense phrase do have. The phrase when I chat does not fit the question; say when I was a child to refer to that past period.

× I used to use it during my free time when I at home.

✓ I used to use it during my free time when I was at home.

The clause when I at home is missing a verb. Add was to form the complete past-tense clause when I was at home.

× In my country, because my country, if uh, my country, do you have athletes there is famous in the world such as way.

✓ In my country, bikes are popular because we have athletes who are famous around the world.

The original contains repeated, unfinished clauses, so the relationship between the ideas is unclear. Use one complete sentence with a clear subject and verb, and connect the reason with because. The relative clause who are famous correctly describes the plural noun athletes.