Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答小时候有没有自行车，再说明自己学骑车的困难和开始会骑的时间。注意时态一致：讲过去用“it was difficult”“I couldn’t”；“difficult”后接“to ride”，而不是“for me to riding”。表达“骑自行车”时说“ride a bike”。

例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I found it difficult to ride at first. I didn’t learn properly until I was in senior high school.

提案: 回答要明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否流行，再用具体场景解释。你可以说“在大学校园里很常见”，并补充学生骑车上课的原因。注意说“on campus”而不是“in the university”，以及“ride bikes to class”而不是“ride bike to go for class”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially on university campuses. Many students ride them to class because it’s a convenient way to get around.

× it's difficult for me to riding the bike

✓ it was difficult for me to ride a bike

“to”后面应接动词原形，不能接动词-ing形式，因此“to riding”应改为“to ride”。

× it's difficult for me to riding the bike and so I can't ride bike until I was in my senior school.

✓ It was difficult for me to ride a bike, so I couldn't ride a bike until I was in high school.

这段话描述的是童年经历，应用过去时。“it's”应改为“it was”，“can't”应改为“couldn't”，以与过去的时间背景保持一致。

× I can't ride bike

✓ I couldn't ride a bike

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。此处可用“a”，说“a bike”。

× I live in the university so for university students on we always ride bike to go for class.

✓ I live on campus, so university students always ride bikes to class.

表示住在大学校园里，通常说“live on campus”；“on”在“students”后面多余；表示去上课应说“go to class”或直接说“ride bikes to class”，不说“go for class”。

× we always ride bike

✓ we always ride bikes

这里泛指大学生通常骑自行车，复数名词“bikes”更合适。也可以用单数表达“ride a bike”，但不能直接说“ride bike”。