Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答的大意可能是“小时候没有自行车，因为不擅长骑车”，但后面的表达难以理解。先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两个具体细节解释原因。注意说“be good at riding a bike”，不要说“good at the bicycle”；描述过去经历时使用过去时，例如“found it difficult”。减少填充词，并把句子说完整。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t very good at riding one. I remember finding it difficult to balance, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

提案: 你表达了自行车在中国很受欢迎这一观点，但“in my guess”“in the China”和“convenience activities”等搭配不自然，也没有说明具体原因。开头直接回答“Yes, they are”，然后补充具体例子，例如共享单车、短途通勤或骑车出行方便。注意说“in China”和“bikes are popular”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and easy to find near bus and subway stations.

× No, actually I don't uh, good at the bicycle.

✓ No, actually, I'm not good at riding a bicycle.

“good”是形容词，前面需要系动词 be。原句用了“don't”后却直接接形容词，结构不正确。可以说“I'm not good at...”；表达擅长骑车时，用“good at + 动名词”，即“good at riding a bicycle”。

× Well, when my child and I think it's very difficult when I go to go on the bike,

✓ Well, when I was a child, I thought it was very difficult to ride a bike.

问题询问小时候的经历，因此这里应使用过去时：“think”改为“thought”，“is”改为“was”。“when my child”与句意不符；结合上下文，应表达“when I was a child”。“to go to go on the bike”可简洁地说“to ride a bike”。

× Umm, in my guess, uh,

✓ Um, I guess,

表达“我猜／我认为”时，通常直接说“I guess”，不说“in my guess”。这里不是介词短语，因此应删除“in”。

× in the China,

✓ in China,

“China”是国家名称，通常不加定冠词“the”。因此应说“in China”。

× the bike to bicycles, umm, are really popular in the country.

✓ Bicycles are really popular in China.

原句中的“the bike to bicycles”是结构不完整的表达，主语不清楚；结合后面的复数动词“are”，可直接用复数名词“Bicycles”作主语。用“in China”也能清楚表达“在中国”。