Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: đổi “Yes, I do” thành “Yes, I did”. Sửa “When I were at eleven” thành “When I was eleven”, và chú ý phát âm/viết đúng “bike” thay vì “bye”. Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc việc bạn thường làm với nó.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eleven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Bạn đã nêu ý kiến nhưng câu trả lời bị dang dở. Sửa “bias/bice” thành “bikes” và “your country” thành “my country” khi nói về đất nước của mình. Hoàn chỉnh lý do bằng cấu trúc tự nhiên như “because they help people stay healthy”; sau đó thêm một ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn người dân đạp xe để tập thể dục hoặc đi lại.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they help people stay healthy. For example, many people ride them in parks or along the streets for exercise.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asks about a past experience using 'Did you have...?' The answer should use the past-tense auxiliary 'did' rather than the present-tense 'do'.

× When I were at eleven I had a bye.

✓ When I was at eleven, I had a bye.

The subject 'I' takes 'was,' not 'were,' in the past tense. Match the verb form to the subject.

× When I were at eleven I had a bye.

✓ When I were eleven, I had a bye.

For someone's age, English uses 'I was eleven,' not 'I was at eleven.' Omit 'at' when stating an age.

× Yes, I think bias are popular in your country because the bice stay healthy and and

✓ Yes, I think bias are popular in my country because the bice stay healthy and and

When answering the examiner, refer to your own country as 'my country,' not 'your country.' Use the appropriate possessive adjective for the speaker's perspective.

× Yes, I think bias are popular in your country because the bice stay healthy and and

✓ Yes, I think bias are popular in your country because bice stay healthy and and

The definite article 'the' is generally omitted before plural nouns when making a general statement. Use 'bice stay healthy' rather than 'the bice stay healthy' in this context.

× Yes, I think bias are popular in your country because the bice stay healthy and and

✓ Yes, I think bias are popular in your country because the bice stay healthy.

The response ends with a repeated conjunction and leaves the thought unfinished. Remove the repeated 'and' and end the sentence once the idea is complete.