Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense: “I had a bike when I was ten.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and finish your thought with one or two clear details. For example, describe its colour and explain why you liked it. Keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was ten years old. It was red, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: State your opinion once, then give a clear reason or comparison. Avoid repeating phrases such as “I don’t think so” and “most people.” Use natural expressions like “most people use cars or motorbikes,” and complete your final thought rather than stopping mid-sentence.

例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people rely on cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient for getting around. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was ten child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was ten years old.

The question asks about a time in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have. For age, say ten years old, not ten child.

× when I was ten child

✓ when I was ten years old

When stating an age, use the plural noun years after a number greater than one. A natural alternative is when I was a child, but that does not specify an age.

× it has red color

✓ it had a red color

The singular countable noun color needs an article. Use a before red color. Since the student is describing a bike from childhood, had also keeps the description in the past.

× Most of people always use car and motorbike.

✓ Most people always use cars and motorbikes.

Use most directly before a plural noun when speaking generally: most people. Do not use of unless a determiner or pronoun follows it, as in most of the people.

× Most of people use always car and motorbike.

✓ Most people always use cars and motorbikes.

The adverb always normally comes before the main verb use. Place it after the subject and before the main verb.

× Most of people always use car and motorbike.

✓ Most people always use cars and motorbikes.

The sentence describes what people generally use, so the countable nouns car and motorbike should be plural: cars and motorbikes.