Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve geçmişte yaşanan olaylarda geçmiş zaman kullanın: “I had a bike”, “I fell”, “I hurt” veya “I broke”. “When I was a child” ve “a good rider” ifadelerine dikkat edin. Cevabı kısa tutup yaşadığınız deneyimi bir ya da iki ilgili ayrıntıyla açıklayın; son bölümdeki tekrarı çıkarın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t a very confident rider. I fell off a few times and hurt my leg and arm, so I found cycling quite frightening.

提案: Önce fikrinizi net biçimde belirtin; “I was born in Turkey” yerine soruyla doğrudan bağlantılı olarak “I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey” diyebilirsiniz. Bisiklet yollarının yetersiz olduğunu anlatmak için “There aren’t enough bike lanes” gibi doğal ve açık bir ifade kullanın. Ardından bu durumun insanları neden bisiklet kullanmaktan alıkoyduğunu bir bağlaçla açıklayın; anlaşılmayan veya tekrarlanan bölümleri çıkarın.

例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in Turkey. In many areas, there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, which can make cycling unsafe. As a result, most people prefer to use other forms of transport.

× I have a bike when I was child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.

× I have a bike when I was child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child.

× but I'm not good driver

✓ but I wasn't a good driver

The statement refers to the student's childhood, so use the past form wasn't. The corrected phrase also needs the article a before good driver.

× because sometimes I'm fell down

✓ because I sometimes fell down

Fell is already the simple past form of fall. Do not add the present-tense auxiliary am before it.

× my leg is hurt

✓ my leg was hurt

The injury happened in the past, so use was rather than the present-tense is.

× my arm is broke

✓ my arm was broken

In this passive construction, use the past participle broken, not the simple past form broke.

× It's really horrible As for me whenever I when I was a child.

✓ It was really horrible for me when I was a child.

The experience happened during childhood, so use was rather than is.

× It's really horrible As for me whenever I when I was a child.

✓ It was really horrible for me when I was a child.

Whenever and when are repeated together here. Use one conjunction, when, to introduce the time clause.

× Turkey's population as a culture is not very well using to bicycles

✓ People in Turkey are not very used to riding bicycles.

In the expression be used to, to is a preposition and is followed by a noun or a gerund. Use riding, not using to bicycles.

× but all of the true cas people is not using the bicycle.

✓ but Turkish people do not use bicycles.

People is plural, so it cannot take the singular verb is. The plural subject takes do not; use the base form use after do.