Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，也给出了具体原因，但句子里的时态和搭配需要改进：“get”应改为“got”；“fell down to the floor”不自然，可说“fell off the bike”或“fell to the ground”。口语中可以用“because”代替“'cause”，让表达更清晰。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. The first time I tried to ride one, I fell off and hurt myself quite badly, so I was nervous about cycling after that.

提案: 回答有观点，也尝试用过去和现在作比较，但“it's”与复数“bikes”不一致；描述过去时应使用“rode”。“a exercising tool”应改为“an exercise tool”，而“recognized as”在这里不够自然，可用“used as”。建议减少填充词“uh”，并说明现在骑车主要用于什么活动，使比较更具体。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, although people use them differently than they used to. When I was younger, many people cycled to get around, but nowadays bikes are more often used for exercise than for commuting.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child 'cause I remember the first time I tried to ride a bike I fell down to the floor and get seriously hurt.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child 'cause I remember the first time I tried to ride a bike, I fell down to the floor and got seriously hurt.

这段经历发生在过去，前面的“fell”已经使用过去时，因此后面的“get”也应改为过去式“got”，以保持时态一致。讲述过去发生的事情时，注意将相关动作的动词都改为过去式。

× Yes, I think it's really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population ride a bike, but currently bike is more recognized as a exercising tool rather than a commuting tool.

✓ Yes, I think they're really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population rode a bike, but currently, a bike is more recognized as an exercise tool rather than a commuting tool.

这里回答的是复数名词“bikes”，所以应使用复数代词“they”，而不是单数代词“it”。使用代词时，要确保它在数上与所指代的名词一致。

× Yes, I think it's really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population ride a bike, but currently bike is more recognized as a exercising tool rather than a commuting tool.

✓ Yes, I think they're really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population rode a bike, but currently, a bike is more recognized as an exercise tool rather than a commuting tool.

“when I was young”指过去的时间，因此描述当时的情况应使用过去式“rode”，不能使用现在式“ride”。叙述过去的习惯或事实时，也要根据过去的时间背景调整动词时态。

× Yes, I think it's really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population ride a bike, but currently bike is more recognized as a exercising tool rather than a commuting tool.

✓ Yes, I think they're really popular in my country. I can recall that when I was young, uh, almost 30% of the population rode a bike, but currently, a bike is more recognized as an exercise tool rather than a commuting tool.

“bike”是单数可数名词，泛指时前面需要加冠词“a”；“exercise tool”前应使用“an”，因为“exercise”以元音音素开头。另外，这里用名词“exercise”修饰“tool”比“exercising tool”更合适。记得检查单数可数名词前是否需要冠词，并根据后续词的发音选择“a”或“an”。