Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp được câu hỏi, nhưng cụm “when in a tri” chưa rõ nghĩa và cần diễn đạt lại. Hãy dùng quá khứ đơn nhất quán: “when I was little” và “my mother bought”. Có thể bổ sung một chi tiết ngắn về việc bạn thường làm với chiếc xe đạp.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was little because my mother bought one for me. I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý kiến “No”, nhưng phần giải thích hiện chưa rõ và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, lặp ý. Hãy nói rõ xe đạp có phổ biến hay không, sau đó nêu một lý do cụ thể; dùng “bicycles are” thay vì “it’s” và tránh lặp “go outside” hoặc “buy something”.

例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.

× Yes, I had a bike when in a tri because my mother buy a bike for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my mother bought a bike for me.

The answer refers to a past time, so buy should be changed to its simple past form, bought. The phrase when in a tri is unclear; when I was a child fits the examiner's question and gives the clause a subject and verb.

× No, I think it's not popular indoor in my country because my school have me going to school it's easy and I can go outside. I can help me go outside, buy something buy something anymore.

✓ No, I think it's not popular indoors in my country because my school has me going to school, it's easy, and I can go outside. I can help me go outside, buy something, buy something anymore.

The subject my school is singular, so the verb should be has, not have. In the phrase it's not popular indoor, indoor is not the appropriate form; indoors is used as an adverb. The rest of the sentence is difficult to interpret, so it has not been substantially rewritten.

× No, I think it's not popular indoor in my country because my school have me going to school it's easy and I can go outside. I can help me go outside, buy something buy something anymore.

✓ No, I think it's not popular indoors in my country because my school have me going to school it's easy and I can go outside. I can help me go outside, buy something buy something anymore.

Indoor is generally an adjective, as in an indoor activity. To describe where something is popular, use the adverb indoors. However, indoors may not fit the intended meaning here; if you mean that bikes are not popular in your country, simply say not popular in my country.