Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答有直接回应问题，也给出了具体原因。注意问题询问的是过去，因此可以用过去时表达童年时不会骑车；另外，“I have poor balance”略显生硬，可改为“I have a poor sense of balance”。可以补充一句说明自己是否因此没有自行车，但控制在五句以内。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I couldn’t ride one. I have a poor sense of balance, and I used to feel nervous riding near traffic.

提案: 回答先表明了观点，但后面的细节有明显用词错误：“say”应为“see”，“have a walk”可改为“go for a walk”。“I will always see”不太自然，描述日常观察时可用一般现在时。建议补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因，例如通勤方便或有助于避开堵车。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling when I go shopping or take a walk, especially during rush hour, because bikes are a convenient way to get around.

× No, actually I can't ride a bike because I have poor balance and I feel nervous on the road.

✓ No, actually I couldn't ride a bike because I had poor balance and felt nervous on the road.

问题询问的是“小时候”是否有自行车，因此回答中的能力、身体状况和感受应使用过去时。将 can't 改为 couldn't，have 改为 had，feel 改为 felt，使时态与过去的时间背景一致。

× When I go shopping or have a walk I will always say many riders on the road.

✓ When I go shopping or have a walk, I always say that there are many riders on the road.

say 后面如果要表达“路上有很多骑车的人”，需要接完整的宾语从句：that there are many riders on the road。原句中的 say many riders 缺少从句所需的谓语结构。此外，这里描述经常发生的情况，用一般现在时 always say 比 will always say 更自然。